Glossier
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The ad
Build your own set with the pieces you love most. Fragrance and makeup, made your way.
Build your dream fragrance set
Shop nowThe funnel behind it
Offer: Get a free Applebaby Keychain when you buy the Balm Dotcom Quintet or Balm Dotcom Trio
Funnel score
8-point CRO breakdown
How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.
This page struggles significantly with speed (26/100 PageSpeed score) and headline clarity—"Fragrance Duo" is generic and doesn't match the ad's promise to "build your dream fragrance set." The offer is buried in a banner at the top and doesn't clearly communicate the customization value. However, the page does show strong social proof with a 5-star review ("Compliment Getter"), detailed scent notes and product information, and a clear visual hierarchy showing the two fragrances. The CTA is present but not prominent, and the mobile experience appears functional but may suffer from the underlying speed issues. Trust is built through product details and authentic customer testimonials, but the mismatch between ad messaging and page content undermines conversion potential.
What this funnel does right. Steal these.
- Social proof7/10
Where it's weak
- Message match2/10
- Page speed3/10
- Headline3/10
- Mobile experience5/10
- Offer clarity5/10
Full breakdown
Call to action
6/10Primary CTA 'Add to bag' is present and functional but not visually prominent or compelling.
- Clear 'Add to bag' button visible in the product section
- CTA appears in a logical location (after product selection)
- Button styling is subtle (outlined, not filled) and doesn't stand out
- No urgency or incentive messaging near the CTA
- CTA text is generic and doesn't reinforce the customization benefit
Page speed
3/10PageSpeed score of 26/100 converts to approximately 2.6/10, indicating severe performance issues that will significantly impact user experience and conversion.
- PageSpeed score of 26/100 is critically low
- Mobile users will experience substantial delays loading images and content
- Slow load times increase bounce rate risk, especially on mobile
Trust signals
6/10Page builds trust through detailed product information, scent notes, and an authentic customer review, but lacks additional trust signals.
- Detailed scent notes (Top: Pink Pepper, Heart: Iris, Base: Ambrette)
- Authentic 5-star customer testimonial with specific benefit claim
- Clear product descriptions and size options
- No visible security badges or trust certifications
- Limited social proof (only one review visible)
- No brand authority signals or expert endorsements
Mobile experience
5/10Layout appears functional on mobile but likely hampered by the severe speed issues (26/100 PageSpeed score).
- Vertical scrolling layout is appropriate for mobile
- Product images are visible and centered
- Text is readable with adequate spacing
- Extremely slow page load (26/100 PageSpeed) will frustrate mobile users
- Multiple sections and images may cause layout shifts during loading
- No visible mobile-specific optimizations or fast-loading indicators
Headline
3/10The headline 'Fragrance Duo' is generic and fails to communicate the customization/build-your-own value promised in the ad.
- Simple and readable typography
- Doesn't match ad headline 'Build your dream fragrance set'
- Generic product name with no benefit or differentiation
- Misses the key selling point of customization
Social proof
7/10Page includes a 5-star customer review ('Compliment Getter') with detailed testimonial, plus product collection imagery showing multiple fragrances.
- 5-star review with authentic customer quote praising the fragrance
- Customer review mentions specific benefit ('gets at least one compliment every time')
- Collection imagery showing multiple fragrance options
- Only one visible review on the page
- No star rating count or number of reviews shown
- No other trust signals like 'bestseller' badges visible on this specific product
Message match
2/10Significant mismatch: ad promises 'build your dream fragrance set' with customization, but page shows a pre-selected duo with limited customization options.
- Page does show two fragrance options to choose from
- Ad headline 'Build your dream fragrance set' doesn't match page headline 'Fragrance Duo'
- Ad emphasizes customization ('pieces you love most'), but page presents a fixed duo product
- Ad primary text mentions 'fragrance and makeup' but page only shows fragrance
Offer clarity
5/10The offer is split between a top banner (free keychain with other products) and the main product page, with the core value proposition of customization buried in small text.
- Price clearly shown ($139, reduced from $154)
- Size options displayed (50ml bottles)
- Scent notes listed for each fragrance
- Top banner promotes unrelated products (Balm Dotcom), not this fragrance duo
- Customization benefit only mentioned in small body text ('Build your dream fragrance set')
- No clear explanation of what makes this duo special or why to choose it
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