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State & Liberty Clothing Company

Instagram · Video

Active
Days running
188 days
Funnel score
59/100
Page speed
26/100

The ad

State & Liberty Clothing Company ad creative

Performance stretch. Modern Tailored fit. No compromises. State & Liberty is trusted by the worldwide leader in sports for a reason.

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Angle: Quality and trust through association with sports authorityHook: Product benefit statement with social proofFormat: Video

The funnel behind it

State & Liberty Clothing Company landing page

Offer: Athletic Fit Performance Fabric Menswear

59/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

State & Liberty's landing page excels at trust-building with 750,000+ customers, 4.8-star reviews, and detailed product benefits (athletic fit, performance fabrics, low maintenance). The hero section effectively showcases the product with professional imagery and clear messaging. However, the page suffers from severe performance issues (PageSpeed 26/100), a weak primary CTA that doesn't match the ad's "Shop now" language, and unclear offer details—no pricing, discounts, or specific promotions visible. The mobile experience appears functional but the slow load time will hurt conversion significantly. Social proof is strong but buried below the fold.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Trust signals8/10
  • Social proof8/10
  • Headline7/10

Where it's weak

  • Page speed3/10
  • Offer clarity4/10
  • Call to action5/10
  • Message match5/10

Full breakdown

Call to action

5/10

Primary CTA 'SHOP NEW ARRIVALS' is visible but doesn't match the ad's 'Shop now' language and is somewhat generic.

What works
  • CTA button is high-contrast white text on dark background, clearly visible in hero section
  • Positioned directly below the hero image where users naturally look
  • Secondary CTAs ('Shop Now' links) appear throughout the page for different product categories
What hurts
  • Primary CTA says 'SHOP NEW ARRIVALS' instead of matching ad's 'Shop now' language, creating message mismatch
  • CTA doesn't create urgency or incentive (no 'Get Free Shipping' or time-limited offer)
  • Multiple competing CTAs throughout page may dilute primary conversion action

Page speed

3/10

PageSpeed score of 26/100 converts to approximately 2.6/10, indicating critical performance problems.

What hurts
  • PageSpeed score of 26/100 is critically low, indicating severe loading delays
  • Multiple large hero images and product photography will load slowly
  • Modal popup and animations may further slow perceived performance

Trust signals

8/10

Strong trust signals throughout: 750,000+ customers, 4.8-star reviews from 50,000+, detailed product benefits, professional imagery, and multiple contact options.

What works
  • 750,000+ customers claim with 4.8-star average and 50,000+ reviews provides strong credibility
  • Detailed customer testimonial with location (James R., Miami, FL) adds authenticity
  • Multiple trust-building elements: in-store fittings, live chat, phone support, email support all listed
What hurts
  • No visible security badges, SSL certificates, or payment security indicators
  • No brand partnerships or third-party certifications mentioned (despite ad claiming 'worldwide leader in sports' partnership)

Mobile experience

6/10

Mobile layout appears functional with stacked elements and readable text, but severe performance issues will impact user experience.

What works
  • Text is readable and properly sized for mobile screens
  • Navigation menu is accessible via hamburger icon
  • Product images scale appropriately for mobile viewing
What hurts
  • PageSpeed score of 26/100 indicates severe performance issues that will cause slow loading on mobile
  • Modal popup for email signup may be intrusive on small screens
  • Multiple high-resolution images throughout page will load slowly on mobile networks

Headline

7/10

The headline 'NEW SUMMER SUITING' is clear and timely, directly matching the product category shown.

What works
  • Headline is specific to the season and product (Summer Suiting)
  • Large, prominent text placement above the fold
  • Subheading 'Athletic Fit Performance Fabric Menswear' reinforces the key product attributes
What hurts
  • Generic phrasing that doesn't create urgency or emotional appeal
  • Doesn't highlight the unique selling proposition (performance, fit, or quality)

Social proof

8/10

Strong social proof section with 750,000+ customers, 4.8-star average from 50,000+ reviews, and a detailed customer testimonial.

What works
  • 750,000+ customers trusted claim with 4.8 average rating and 50,000+ reviews displayed prominently
  • Full customer testimonial from James R. (Miami, FL) describing specific product benefits and satisfaction
  • Five-star rating visual displayed above the testimonial
What hurts
  • Social proof section appears below the fold, not immediately visible to first-time visitors
  • Only one customer testimonial shown; rotating carousel suggests more exist but aren't visible

Message match

5/10

Moderate alignment: page shows performance fabrics and tailored fit as promised, but doesn't emphasize the 'worldwide leader in sports' partnership or 'no compromises' positioning.

What works
  • Page prominently features 'Performance Stretch Fabrics' and 'Athletic Fit' matching ad's core claims
  • Product imagery shows professional, tailored appearance matching ad's positioning
  • Subheading 'Athletic Fit Performance Fabric Menswear' directly echoes ad's key attributes
What hurts
  • Ad mentions 'trusted by the worldwide leader in sports' but page shows no sports partnership or endorsement
  • Ad's 'No compromises' positioning not reinforced on page—no comparison or competitive advantage stated
  • Page focuses on summer suiting specifically, while ad is broader about performance and fit

Offer clarity

4/10

The page shows product categories and benefits but lacks any visible pricing, discount, or specific promotional offer.

What works
  • Four clear product benefits listed: True Athletic Fit, Performance Stretch Fabrics, Sharp Professional Appearance, Low Maintenance
  • Product categories clearly labeled (Athletic Fit Stretch Suits, Summer Essentials, Performance Suiting)
What hurts
  • No pricing information visible anywhere on the page
  • No discount or promotional offer stated (ad mentions 'no compromises' but page doesn't clarify what's being offered)
  • No clear value proposition or reason to buy now vs. later

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