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Harry's

Facebook · Instagram · Messenger · Image

Active
Days running
134 days
Funnel score
50/100
Page speed
52/100

The ad

😃 Smile-worthy shave starts with a great razor 🪒! Get your starter set for just £5.60.

Save 50% on starter sets

Shop now
Angle: Value proposition with emotional benefitHook: Emoji-driven emotional appealFormat: Static image with promotional overlay

The funnel behind it

Harry's landing page

Offer: €5 €10 Spare €5

50/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This landing page does well at presenting a clear value proposition with prominent pricing (€5 vs €10), good product imagery, and a straightforward CTA button. However, it struggles with several critical issues: the page is in German while the ad is in English (poor message match), the mobile experience appears cramped with a cookie consent overlay dominating the fold, page speed is poor at 52/100, and there's minimal social proof visible (no reviews, testimonials, or trust badges). The offer clarity is good but undermined by the language mismatch and the intrusive cookie banner that blocks the primary content on mobile.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Offer clarity: The pricing is prominently displayed (€5 vs €10 crossed out) with clear savings messaging, though the offer details are somewhat buried below the fold.
  • Call to action: The 'HINZUFÜGEN' (Add to Cart) button is prominent in red/orange and clearly visible, though it's action-oriented rather than benefit-driven.

Where it's weak

  • Social proof: No visible customer reviews, testimonials, ratings, or trust badges are present on either page section shown.
  • Message match: The ad is in English promoting a 'smile-worthy shave' and £5.60 pricing, but the landing page is entirely in German with €5 pricing, creating significant language and currency mismatch.
  • Mobile experience: The mobile experience is severely compromised by a large cookie consent banner that dominates the fold, obscuring the primary product offer and CTA.
  • Page speed: PageSpeed score of 52/100 indicates poor performance, likely causing friction in the user journey and higher bounce rates.
  • Trust signals: While the Harry's brand logo is visible, there are no security badges, guarantees, free shipping callouts, or customer testimonials to build trust with first-time visitors.

Full breakdown

Call to action7/10

The 'HINZUFÜGEN' (Add to Cart) button is prominent in red/orange and clearly visible, though it's action-oriented rather than benefit-driven.

Page speed5/10

PageSpeed score of 52/100 indicates poor performance, likely causing friction in the user journey and higher bounce rates.

Trust signals5/10

While the Harry's brand logo is visible, there are no security badges, guarantees, free shipping callouts, or customer testimonials to build trust with first-time visitors.

Mobile experience4/10

The mobile experience is severely compromised by a large cookie consent banner that dominates the fold, obscuring the primary product offer and CTA.

Headline6/10

The headline 'Einstiegs-Set' (Starter Set) is descriptive but generic and doesn't create urgency or emotional appeal compared to the ad's 'smile-worthy' messaging.

Social proof2/10

No visible customer reviews, testimonials, ratings, or trust badges are present on either page section shown.

Message match3/10

The ad is in English promoting a 'smile-worthy shave' and £5.60 pricing, but the landing page is entirely in German with €5 pricing, creating significant language and currency mismatch.

Offer clarity8/10

The pricing is prominently displayed (€5 vs €10 crossed out) with clear savings messaging, though the offer details are somewhat buried below the fold.

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