Born Primitive
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The ad
When staying concealed is your priority, no pattern does it better than the one backed by 35 years in the field. We combined our best-selling layers with the Mossy Oak® Original Bottomland® pattern for unmatched performance and concealment in the field.
Born Primitive x Mossy Oak® Original Bottomland®
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Offer: ON YOUR FIRST ORDER
Funnel score
8-point CRO breakdown
How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.
This page does well at displaying a focused product collection with clear pricing, color options, and product badges (Owner Pick, Best Seller, Staff Pick) that build credibility. However, it suffers from poor page speed (37/100), lacks prominent social proof like customer reviews or testimonials, and the main headline "SIGN UP AND SAVE 10%" appears only at the bottom rather than reinforcing the Mossy Oak collaboration prominently. The CTA is generic ("Shop now") and doesn't leverage the ad's compelling 35-year heritage messaging. The page also shows a geo-redirect dialog at the top that may distract from the primary offer.
What this funnel does right. Steal these.
- Offer clarity7/10
Where it's weak
- Social proof2/10
- Message match2/10
- Headline3/10
- Call to action4/10
- Page speed4/10
- Trust signals5/10
Full breakdown
Call to action
4/10Primary CTA is generic 'Shop now' text; secondary CTA at bottom is 'Email' signup for discount, but neither leverages the ad's compelling messaging.
- Email signup CTA has a clear arrow button (→) for visual direction
- Multiple product cards with implicit 'add to cart' functionality
- 'Shop now' is generic and doesn't reference the Mossy Oak collaboration
- No prominent CTA that emphasizes the concealment/performance benefit
- Signup CTA at bottom is secondary and doesn't match the ad's urgency
Page speed
4/10PageSpeed score of 37/100 converts to approximately 3.7, indicating significant performance issues that will hurt user experience and conversions.
- PageSpeed score of 37/100 is critically low
- Slow load times will increase bounce rate and reduce conversions
- Multiple product images likely not optimized for fast delivery
Trust signals
5/10Page shows internal curation badges and a recognizable brand, but lacks customer reviews, security indicators, or third-party validation of the Mossy Oak partnership.
- Born Primitive branding is consistent and professional
- Internal badges (Owner Pick, Best Seller, Staff Pick) suggest curation
- Clear pricing and product information
- No customer reviews or ratings visible
- No security badges or trust signals (SSL, money-back guarantee, etc.)
- No third-party validation of Mossy Oak partnership or product quality
Mobile experience
6/10Layout appears responsive with products in a grid, but the geo-redirect dialog at top may be intrusive on mobile, and text sizing could be optimized.
- Product grid appears to stack appropriately for mobile viewing
- Color swatches are visible and tappable
- Prices are clearly readable
- Geo-redirect dialog at top takes up significant screen real estate on mobile
- Filter and sort options may be harder to access on smaller screens
- Email signup form at bottom may require scrolling on mobile
Headline
3/10The visible headline 'SIGN UP AND SAVE 10%' is generic and doesn't match the ad's compelling Mossy Oak collaboration story.
- Headline is large and readable
- Headline doesn't mention Mossy Oak or the collaboration
- Doesn't communicate the 35-year heritage or concealment benefit from the ad
- Generic discount offer doesn't differentiate this collection
Social proof
2/10Only internal badges (Owner Pick, Best Seller, Staff Pick) are present; no customer reviews, ratings, or testimonials visible anywhere on the page.
- Product badges (Owner Pick, Best Seller, Staff Pick) indicate internal curation
- No customer reviews or star ratings visible on any product
- No testimonials or user-generated content
- No mention of Mossy Oak's 35-year credibility or field-tested heritage
Message match
2/10Ad emphasizes 35-year heritage, Mossy Oak partnership, and concealment performance, but the page shows only a generic product collection with no mention of these differentiators.
- Products shown are in Mossy Oak Original Bottomland pattern (visible in images)
- No headline mentioning Mossy Oak or the collaboration
- No mention of 35-year heritage or field-tested credibility
- No emphasis on concealment performance or pattern benefits
Offer clarity
7/10Product prices and color options are clearly visible on each item, but the specific Mossy Oak collaboration benefit isn't emphasized in the main headline.
- Individual product prices clearly displayed ($145-$185 range visible)
- Color swatches shown for each product variant
- Product names are specific and descriptive (e.g., 'Men's Frontier Pant Light 2.0')
- No clear explanation of what makes Mossy Oak Original Bottomland special
- The 35-year heritage mentioned in ad is not visible on the page
- Offer at bottom (10% off signup) is disconnected from the collection hero
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