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Legion

Facebook · Instagram · Audience Network · Video

Active
Days running
11 days
Funnel score
57/100
Page speed
29/100

The ad

Legion ad creative

🔥 BUY 1 GET 1 FREE CREATINE GUMMIES🔥 Our naturally sweetened and flavored creatine gummies contain a clinically proven dose of lab-tested creatine monohydrate scientifically shown to enhance strength, muscle growth and endurance, recovery, and cognition. ✅ 505 peer-reviewed scientific studies support our creatine gummies' ingredient and dose ✅ No soy, gluten, artificial sweeteners, flavors, food dyes, fillers, or other unnecessary junk ✅ Clean and transparent label with no proprietary blends or hidden ingredients ✅ Third-party lab-tested for purity and accuracy and certified by Labdoor™ to meet or exceed FDA safety guidelines ✅ Made in the USA with globally sourced ingredients in NSF-certified, FDA-inspected facilities Plus: For a limited time, when you buy one bottle of our creatine gummies, you can get a second one FREE. So, yeah. Try our creatine gummies risk-free and save big. You’ll love them. It’s science.

Buy 1 Get 1 FREE 👉🏻

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Angle: Scientific credibility + limited-time deal incentiveHook: Urgency-driven promotion (BOGO offer)Format: Video ad with text overlay

The funnel behind it

Legion landing page

Offer: Subscribe & Save 30% for $34.99 ($1.17/serving) or One-Time Purchase for $49.99 ($1.67/serving)

57/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This page excels at building trust through extensive social proof (4.4★ rating with 482 verified reviews, 10K+ bought last month, third-party lab testing by Labdoor, expert testimonials), comprehensive ingredient transparency, and multiple trust signals (money-back guarantee, made in USA, FDA-inspected facilities). However, it significantly underperforms on message match—the ad promises "BUY 1 GET 1 FREE" as the primary offer, but the landing page leads with "Subscribe & Save 30%" instead, creating immediate friction and confusion. The page also suffers from poor mobile optimization (evidenced by the 29 PageSpeed score) and a weak primary CTA that's buried below the fold rather than prominently featured above the fold. The subscription model doesn't align with the ad's promotional offer, which is a critical conversion killer.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Social proof: Exceptional social proof with 4.4★ rating from 482 verified reviews, 10K+ bought last month, expert testimonial from Dr. Bill Campbell PhD, Labdoor certification, and detailed review section visible.
  • Trust signals: Strong trust signals including Labdoor certification, third-party lab testing, 100% money-back guarantee, made in USA with FDA-inspected facilities, and extensive scientific backing with 505 peer-reviewed studies cited.
  • Headline: The headline 'Creatine Gummies' is clear and direct, though it lacks the promotional urgency of the ad's 'Buy 1 Get 1 FREE' headline.

Where it's weak

  • Message match2/10

    Critical mismatch: the ad advertises 'BUY 1 GET 1 FREE' but the landing page only shows subscription and one-time purchase options without the BOGO offer, breaking the ad promise.

  • Page speed3/10

    PageSpeed score of 29 is critically poor, indicating the page loads very slowly and will cause significant bounce rates on mobile and slower connections.

  • Mobile experience3/10

    PageSpeed score of 29 indicates severe mobile performance issues; the layout appears cramped with small touch targets and likely slow load times on mobile devices.

  • Offer clarity5/10

    The subscription offer is clearly presented, but the advertised 'Buy 1 Get 1 FREE' promotion is completely absent from the page, creating major confusion about the actual offer.

Full breakdown

Call to action6/10

The 'Subscribe Now' button is present but appears grayed out/disabled in the visible section and is not prominently positioned above the fold, reducing urgency and visibility.

Page speed3/10

PageSpeed score of 29 is critically poor, indicating the page loads very slowly and will cause significant bounce rates on mobile and slower connections.

Trust signals8/10

Strong trust signals including Labdoor certification, third-party lab testing, 100% money-back guarantee, made in USA with FDA-inspected facilities, and extensive scientific backing with 505 peer-reviewed studies cited.

Mobile experience3/10

PageSpeed score of 29 indicates severe mobile performance issues; the layout appears cramped with small touch targets and likely slow load times on mobile devices.

Headline7/10

The headline 'Creatine Gummies' is clear and direct, though it lacks the promotional urgency of the ad's 'Buy 1 Get 1 FREE' headline.

Social proof9/10

Exceptional social proof with 4.4★ rating from 482 verified reviews, 10K+ bought last month, expert testimonial from Dr. Bill Campbell PhD, Labdoor certification, and detailed review section visible.

Message match2/10

Critical mismatch: the ad advertises 'BUY 1 GET 1 FREE' but the landing page only shows subscription and one-time purchase options without the BOGO offer, breaking the ad promise.

Offer clarity5/10

The subscription offer is clearly presented, but the advertised 'Buy 1 Get 1 FREE' promotion is completely absent from the page, creating major confusion about the actual offer.

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