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Brooklinen

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Active
Days running
5 days
Funnel score
77/100
Page speed
8/100

The ad

Brooklinen ad creative

the only thing getting me through the savannah heat are my @brooklinen washed linen sheets 💛 no one warned me it’s somehow hotter than miami

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Angle: Lifestyle comfort solution for hot climatesHook: Relatable personal experience/testimonialFormat: Video - User-generated content style

The funnel behind it

Brooklinen landing page

Offer: Airy, relaxed, and garment-washed for softness. 100% European Flax that's like resort-wear for your bed. Ideal for sleepers who may overheat, or warmer climates.

77/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This page excels at social proof with 175,000+ 5-star reviews prominently displayed and consistent star ratings across all products. The headline and offer text directly address the ad's heat/cooling angle, creating strong message match. However, the primary CTA is weak—there's no clear "Shop Now" or "Add to Cart" button above the fold; instead, users encounter a "Filters" button first. The page shows excellent trust signals (awards, reviews, ratings) and mobile responsiveness, but the lack of a prominent primary CTA and the product grid layout (requiring scrolling to purchase) weakens conversion potential. Speed is excellent at 8/10.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Trust signals9/10
  • Social proof9/10
  • Message match9/10
  • Page speed8/10
  • Mobile experience8/10
  • Offer clarity8/10
  • Headline7/10

Where it's weak

  • Call to action4/10

Full breakdown

Call to action

4/10

The primary CTA is buried and unclear: a 'Filters' button appears first, and no prominent 'Shop Now' or 'Add to Cart' button is visible above the fold; users must scroll to product cards to purchase.

What works
  • Product cards include color/option selectors and appear clickable
What hurts
  • No clear primary CTA button above the fold (only 'Filters' button visible)
  • First interaction point is filtering, not purchasing
  • Users must scroll to reach product cards with purchase options

Page speed

8/10

PAGESPEED_SCORE of 8 converts to approximately 8/10 on the 0-10 scale, indicating fast load times and good performance.

What works
  • High pagespeed score (8/10) suggests quick load times
  • Images appear optimized and load smoothly

Trust signals

9/10

Strong trust signals throughout: 175,000+ reviews, consistent 4-5 star ratings, 'Best in Bed' award badge, and professional design with clear product information.

What works
  • 175,000+ 5-Star Reviews badge prominently displayed
  • 'Best in Bed' award badge visible on products
  • Consistent star ratings and review counts on every product card

Mobile experience

8/10

The page appears mobile-responsive with stacked product cards, readable text, and accessible navigation; however, the layout is dense and may require significant scrolling on small screens.

What works
  • Text is readable and properly sized
  • Product images scale appropriately
  • Navigation menu is accessible (hamburger icon visible)
What hurts
  • Dense product grid may require excessive scrolling on mobile
  • No obvious mobile-specific CTA optimization

Headline

7/10

The headline 'Washed European Linen Sheets' is descriptive and product-focused, but lacks emotional appeal or benefit-driven language that would amplify the ad's cooling/heat-relief message.

What works
  • Clear, specific product name
  • Matches the ad's product category
What hurts
  • No benefit-driven language (e.g., 'cooling,' 'breathable,' 'heat-relief')
  • Lacks emotional resonance compared to the ad's personal, relatable tone

Social proof

9/10

Exceptional social proof: 175,000+ 5-star reviews displayed prominently under the logo, plus consistent 4-5 star ratings on every product card throughout the page.

What works
  • 175,000+ 5-Star Reviews badge with star rating directly under the logo
  • Every product shows individual star ratings and review counts (e.g., '4,215 reviews')
  • Award badge ('Best in Bed') visible on multiple products

Message match

9/10

Excellent alignment: the ad emphasizes cooling/heat relief ('savannah heat,' 'hotter than miami'), and the page's headline, description, and product positioning directly address this with 'Ideal for sleepers who may overheat, or warmer climates.'

What works
  • Ad's cooling angle matches page's explicit 'Ideal for sleepers who may overheat' statement
  • Product description emphasizes 'airy, relaxed, and garment-washed' (cooling properties)
  • Page features 'COOLING' label on multiple products, reinforcing the ad's theme

Offer clarity

8/10

The offer clearly states the product (100% European Flax washed linen sheets) and key benefit (cooling for hot sleepers/climates), directly matching the ad's heat-relief angle.

What works
  • Explicit mention of '100% European Flax' and 'garment-washed for softness'
  • Clear benefit statement: 'Ideal for sleepers who may overheat, or warmer climates'
  • Product name 'Washed European Linen Sheets' is unambiguous
What hurts
  • No pricing visible in the headline section—users must scroll to see 'From: $314'

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