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Days running
574 days
Funnel score
69/100
Page speed
29/100

The ad

Botanique Paris ad creative

10 Years Younger with this Sneaky Hack ๐Ÿคซ ๐Ÿ”ฅ Get Rid Of Dark Circles While You Netflix & Chill ๐Ÿšจ 10 Minutes of Red Light Therapy = Botox & UnderEye Filler โšก 25000+ Success Stories ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿป See a Difference in 30 days or your $ back!

It's this or surgery ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ

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Angle: Non-invasive anti-aging alternative to cosmetic proceduresHook: Fear-based urgency (surgery vs. alternative)Format: Image ad with benefit-driven copy

The funnel behind it

Botanique Paris landing page
69/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Call to action8/10
  • Offer clarity8/10
  • Trust signals7/10
  • Mobile experience7/10
  • Headline7/10
  • Social proof7/10

Where it's weak

  • Page speed3/10

Full breakdown

Call to action

8/10

Two CTAs present: a prominent pink 'ERASE EYE BAGS โœจ' button mid-page and a black 'ERASE EYE BAGS' button near the bottom with urgency messaging.

What works
  • High-contrast pink button stands out visually against the page
  • Action-oriented language 'ERASE EYE BAGS' is clear and benefit-focused
  • Urgency elements: 'LIMITED TIME', countdown timer showing 'DEAL ENDING IN', and 'Sell-Out Risk: High'
What hurts
  • Two different CTA buttons with slightly different styling may dilute focus
  • The countdown timer appears to show 00:55:55 which may not be credible if it resets

Page speed

3/10

PageSpeed score of 29 is critically slow, converting to approximately 3/10 on the 0-10 scale.

What hurts
  • PageSpeed score of 29 indicates severe performance issues
  • Multiple high-resolution before/after images likely not optimized
  • Device product images and carousel functionality may be loading inefficiently

Trust signals

7/10

Trust is built through medical credentials, before/after evidence, customer testimonials, and money-back guarantee, though some claims may feel overstated.

What works
  • Kelly Moore, MD credential with specific title and location (Beverly Hills Celebrity Dermatologist)
  • Money-back guarantee: '30 days or your $ back' reduces purchase risk
  • Multiple before/after photos from different users provide visual evidence
What hurts
  • Claims like 'Permanently Without Surgery' and 'Fastest Scientifically Proven' are strong assertions without visible clinical trial data
  • Date on Kelly Moore's endorsement (August 20, 2026) is in the future, which is suspicious
  • No visible security badges, SSL certificate, or company registration information

Mobile experience

7/10

Page appears mobile-responsive with stacked layout, readable text, and touch-friendly button sizes, though some elements could be optimized.

What works
  • Large, tappable CTA buttons with adequate spacing
  • Text is readable at mobile sizes with good contrast
  • Images scale appropriately and before/after comparisons are clear on mobile
What hurts
  • Long headline may wrap awkwardly on small screens
  • Carousel of testimonials may be harder to navigate on mobile

Headline

7/10

The main headline 'Fastest Scientifically Proven Technology 300,000+ Used to Get Rid of Eye Bags Permanently Without Surgery' is benefit-driven and specific, though lengthy.

What works
  • Directly addresses the pain point (eye bags) and the solution (without surgery)
  • Includes social proof number (300,000+) in the headline itself
  • Uses power words like 'Fastest' and 'Scientifically Proven'
What hurts
  • Headline is very long and could lose attention mid-read
  • Word 'Permanently' may be overpromising and could hurt trust

Social proof

7/10

Multiple forms of social proof present: 300,000+ users mentioned in headline, before/after photos, celebrity dermatologist endorsement, and customer testimonial with 5-star rating.

What works
  • Kelly Moore, MD credential with 'Beverly Hills Celebrity Dermatologist' title and date (August 20, 2026)
  • Customer testimonial from 'Lily R.' with 5-star rating and detailed positive review
  • Multiple before/after photos showing real results across different users
What hurts
  • Only one customer review visible; more reviews would strengthen proof
  • No mention of total review count or aggregate rating score

Message match

6/10

Moderate alignment between ad and page. Ad emphasizes 'dark circles' and '10 minutes of red light therapy' while page focuses more on 'eye bags' and a dual-action system with cream + device.

What works
  • Both ad and page mention red light therapy technology
  • Both promise visible results quickly (ad: 30 days, page: 2 weeks)
  • Both reference the non-surgical alternative positioning
What hurts
  • Ad emphasizes 'dark circles' but page leads with 'eye bags' as primary benefit
  • Ad claims '10 minutes' but page describes a 2-week routine without specifying daily time commitment
  • Ad mentions 'Botox & UnderEye Filler' comparison but page doesn't use this language

Offer clarity

8/10

The offer is clear: a device + cream system to reduce eye bags and dark circles in 2 weeks, with an 'End of Summer Sale' positioned as the lowest price of the year.

What works
  • Before/after photos clearly show the transformation
  • Specific timeline stated: 'In just two weeks' and '30 days or your money back'
  • Product name 'RevitalEyes' and brand 'Botanique Paris' clearly displayed
What hurts
  • Multiple competing offers: the main product vs. the 'End of Summer Sale' creates some confusion about what's being sold
  • Price not visible in the screenshots provided

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