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Botanique Paris

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Active
Days running
493 days
Funnel score
76/100
Page speed
39/100

The ad

Botanique Paris ad creative

10 Years Younger with this Sneaky Hack 🤫 🔥 Get Rid Of Dark Circles While You Netflix & Chill 🚨 10 Minutes of Red Light Therapy = Botox & UnderEye Filler ⚡ 25000+ Success Stories 💪🏻 See a Difference in 30 days or your $ back!

Who even gets filler anymore? 😏

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Angle: Anti-aging shortcut positioning red light therapy as a non-invasive alternative to cosmetic proceduresHook: Curiosity gap with social proof (success stories and money-back guarantee)Format: Video testimonial or before/after demonstration

The funnel behind it

Botanique Paris landing page
76/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Call to action9/10
  • Trust signals8/10
  • Social proof8/10
  • Message match8/10
  • Offer clarity8/10
  • Mobile experience7/10
  • Headline7/10

Where it's weak

  • Page speed4/10

Full breakdown

Call to action

9/10

Primary CTA 'ERASE EYE BAGS' is prominent, large, pink button positioned above the fold and repeated as 'ERASE EYE BAGS' in black at bottom of sale section; secondary 'SHOP NOW' CTA also present in sale box.

What works
  • Large pink button 'ERASE EYE BAGS ✨' with high contrast and clear action
  • CTA appears multiple times on page (above fold and in sale section)
  • Action-oriented language ('ERASE') is specific and benefit-focused

Page speed

4/10

PageSpeed score of 39 is poor, converting to approximately 4/10 on the 0-10 scale; this will significantly impact mobile user experience and conversions.

What hurts
  • PageSpeed score of 39 indicates slow loading performance
  • Multiple high-resolution before/after images likely not optimized
  • Likely unoptimized video or animation elements slowing page load

Trust signals

8/10

Strong trust signals: MD credibility (Kelly Moore, Beverly Hills dermatologist), FDA-approved technology mentioned, specific before/after results, detailed scientific explanations, customer testimonials, and money-back guarantee implied.

What works
  • Kelly Moore, MD credential with Beverly Hills dermatologist title and date
  • Multiple detailed before/after photos showing real results
  • FDA-approved red light therapy technology explicitly mentioned
What hurts
  • No visible security badges, SSL certificate, or payment security indicators
  • No return policy or guarantee terms explicitly stated on visible page sections

Mobile experience

7/10

Page appears mobile-responsive with stacked layout, readable text, and touch-friendly buttons, though some before/after image pairs could be larger on small screens.

What works
  • Large, tappable CTA buttons with adequate spacing
  • Text is readable and properly sized for mobile viewing
  • Content flows vertically in logical sections
What hurts
  • Before/after image comparisons are side-by-side which may be cramped on small phones
  • Some sections with dense text could benefit from more whitespace on mobile

Headline

7/10

Main headline is benefit-driven but somewhat generic: 'Fastest Scientifically Proven Technology 300,000+ Used to Get Rid of Eye Bags Permanently Without Surgery.'

What works
  • Leads with 'Fastest' and 'Scientifically Proven' to establish credibility
  • Includes social proof number (300,000+) in the headline itself
  • Clear benefit statement: 'Get Rid of Eye Bags Permanently Without Surgery'
What hurts
  • Headline is quite long and could be more punchy
  • Uses 'Permanently' which may be overpromising for a topical product

Social proof

8/10

Multiple forms of social proof present: 300,000+ users mentioned in headline, 5-star review from Emma T. with detailed testimonial, before/after photos throughout, and expert credibility from Kelly Moore, MD.

What works
  • 300,000+ usage statistic in main headline
  • Named 5-star review from 'Emma T.' with specific testimonial about results vs. surgery
  • Multiple before/after photo comparisons showing visible results
What hurts
  • Only one customer review visible (Emma T.) - more reviews would strengthen
  • No overall star rating or review count aggregated

Message match

8/10

Ad promises 'Get Rid of Dark Circles,' 'Red Light Therapy = Botox & Filler alternative,' and '30 days or money back' - page delivers on all these with detailed explanations of the technology, before/afters, and the device/cream combo system.

What works
  • Ad mentions 'Red Light Therapy' - page extensively explains FDA-approved red light therapy technology
  • Ad promises results in 30 days - page mentions 'In just two weeks' for dramatic reduction
  • Ad positions as Botox/filler alternative - page headline emphasizes 'Without Surgery'
What hurts
  • Ad emphasizes 'Dark Circles' but page focuses more on 'Eye Bags' (related but different concerns)

Offer clarity

8/10

The offer is clearly stated: up to 70% off plus a free gift with limited-time urgency and countdown timer visible.

What works
  • Bold 'UP TO 70% OFF + FREE GIFT!' headline in large text
  • Countdown timer showing exact time remaining (00:55:59)
  • Clear statement 'This End of Summer Sale is our lowest price of the year'
What hurts
  • Free gift is mentioned but never specified what it is
  • No clear pricing shown (original vs. sale price comparison missing)

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