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Ollie

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Active
Days running
11 days
Funnel score
70/100
Page speed
41/100

The ad

Ollie ad creative

I didn't overhaul anything. I just swapped Boo's food for Ollie and let it do its thing. A few weeks later his coat was shinier, his stomach was calmer, and he was losing his mind over dinner in the best way. See why our editors are not going back to kibble 🐶✨

The Dog Food Switch Our Editors Swear By

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Angle: Social proof through editor endorsement with tangible health resultsHook: Relatable transformation narrative (minimal effort, maximum results)Format: Image ad with testimonial-style copy

The funnel behind it

Ollie landing page

Offer: OLLIE Full Fresh Meal Plan

70/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This page excels at building trust through authentic storytelling, detailed personal experience, and clear product differentiation. The narrative is compelling and emotionally resonant, with strong social proof from the author's real dog (Boo) and multiple product images. However, the page suffers from poor mobile optimization and slow load times (41 PageSpeed score), which significantly impact user experience. The CTA placement is somewhat buried within the content rather than prominently featured, and the offer clarity could be stronger with more explicit pricing/plan details visible above the fold. The message match between the ad and page is strong, but technical performance issues undermine conversion potential.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Headline: The headline is compelling, specific, and directly addresses the main objection (cost) while promising a resolution, perfectly matching the ad messaging.
  • Message match: Excellent alignment between ad (editor swears by it, coat shinier, stomach calmer, dog loves dinner) and page content (detailed account of Boo's transformation with same benefits).
  • Trust signals: Trust is built through authentic first-person narrative, specific dog details, veterinary consultation mentions, TSS approval badge, and transparent discussion of both benefits and practical considerations.
  • Social proof: Strong social proof through detailed personal narrative about the author's dog Boo, multiple before/after photos, TSS approval badge, and specific health improvements documented.
  • Offer clarity: The offer (Full Fresh Meal Plan) is clearly labeled with a CTA button, but pricing details and plan specifics are not prominently displayed above the fold.

Where it's weak

  • Page speed: PageSpeed score of 41 indicates poor performance; the page likely loads slowly and may have significant mobile usability issues.
  • Mobile experience: The layout appears to stack vertically but text is dense and images may not be optimized for mobile viewing, suggesting suboptimal mobile experience.

Full breakdown

Call to action6/10

The primary 'Shop Now' CTA is present but appears mid-page within a featured product box rather than being prominently placed above the fold or repeated throughout.

Page speed4/10

PageSpeed score of 41 indicates poor performance; the page likely loads slowly and may have significant mobile usability issues.

Trust signals8/10

Trust is built through authentic first-person narrative, specific dog details, veterinary consultation mentions, TSS approval badge, and transparent discussion of both benefits and practical considerations.

Mobile experience5/10

The layout appears to stack vertically but text is dense and images may not be optimized for mobile viewing, suggesting suboptimal mobile experience.

Headline9/10

The headline is compelling, specific, and directly addresses the main objection (cost) while promising a resolution, perfectly matching the ad messaging.

Social proof8/10

Strong social proof through detailed personal narrative about the author's dog Boo, multiple before/after photos, TSS approval badge, and specific health improvements documented.

Message match9/10

Excellent alignment between ad (editor swears by it, coat shinier, stomach calmer, dog loves dinner) and page content (detailed account of Boo's transformation with same benefits).

Offer clarity7/10

The offer (Full Fresh Meal Plan) is clearly labeled with a CTA button, but pricing details and plan specifics are not prominently displayed above the fold.

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