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Ollie

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Active
Days running
66 days
Funnel score
61/100
Page speed
42/100

The ad

Ollie ad creative

🐶 Let your pup be the food critic! Announcing our NEW $25 Sampler Box so your pup can try all 5 fresh recipes! 🥣✨ 🥕 Fresh, human-grade ingredients 🧠 Personalized to your dog 🐾 Try a few before going all in

Let Your Dog Taste Test

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Angle: Risk reversal through sampling - let dogs try before committing to full subscriptionHook: Curiosity/Playful personification - positioning dog as food criticFormat: Product showcase image with lifestyle/benefit callouts

The funnel behind it

Ollie landing page

Offer: $25 Fresh Sampler Box

61/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This landing page does several things well: it has a clear, benefit-driven headline that matches the ad intent, excellent visual hierarchy with the dog and food imagery, and a well-structured "How it works" section that reduces friction. The offer is crystal clear ($25 sampler with 5 recipes), and the page effectively communicates the value proposition. However, it suffers from critical weaknesses in page speed (42 is poor), lacks visible social proof elements like reviews or testimonials, and the CTA button text ("Try Fresh for $25") doesn't match the ad's "Shop now" language, creating minor friction. The mobile experience appears adequate but the slow load time will hurt conversion significantly.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Offer clarity: The $25 Fresh Sampler Box offer is prominently displayed with clear details about what's included (five recipes and serving scoop).
  • Headline: The headline 'Find your dog's favorite food' is benefit-driven and directly addresses the page's purpose of helping dogs discover preferred recipes.
  • Call to action: The primary CTA 'Try Fresh for $25' is clear and action-oriented, though it appears multiple times which is good, but doesn't match the ad's 'Shop now' language.
  • Mobile experience: The layout appears responsive with stacked sections suitable for mobile, though the slow page speed will negatively impact the mobile experience.
  • Message match: The page aligns well with the ad's core message about letting dogs taste test multiple recipes, though the ad emphasizes 'food critic' personality while the page is more functional.

Where it's weak

  • Page speed: PageSpeed score of 42 is significantly below the 50+ threshold for acceptable performance, indicating serious loading delays that will hurt conversion rates.
  • Social proof: The page lacks visible customer testimonials, reviews, ratings, or trust badges; only a vague reference to 'the Ollie pack' appears without quantifiable social proof.

Full breakdown

Call to action7/10

The primary CTA 'Try Fresh for $25' is clear and action-oriented, though it appears multiple times which is good, but doesn't match the ad's 'Shop now' language.

Page speed2/10

PageSpeed score of 42 is significantly below the 50+ threshold for acceptable performance, indicating serious loading delays that will hurt conversion rates.

Trust signals6/10

The page includes product quality signals (no artificial flavors, fresh ingredients) and a structured onboarding process, but lacks customer reviews, certifications, or guarantees that would strengthen trust.

Mobile experience7/10

The layout appears responsive with stacked sections suitable for mobile, though the slow page speed will negatively impact the mobile experience.

Headline8/10

The headline 'Find your dog's favorite food' is benefit-driven and directly addresses the page's purpose of helping dogs discover preferred recipes.

Social proof3/10

The page lacks visible customer testimonials, reviews, ratings, or trust badges; only a vague reference to 'the Ollie pack' appears without quantifiable social proof.

Message match7/10

The page aligns well with the ad's core message about letting dogs taste test multiple recipes, though the ad emphasizes 'food critic' personality while the page is more functional.

Offer clarity9/10

The $25 Fresh Sampler Box offer is prominently displayed with clear details about what's included (five recipes and serving scoop).

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