Botanique Paris
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The ad
Yes, we said it. 😏
We know you want it too 👉
Shop nowThe funnel behind it
Offer: RevitalEyes® 2-in-1 Red Light Therapy + Peptide Eye Bags - $79.95 (reduced from $159.99)
Funnel score
8-point CRO breakdown
How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.
This page excels at social proof with extensive before/after imagery, verified clinician reviews, and specific result percentages (82-91% improvement claims). The headline is clear and benefit-focused. However, the page suffers from poor mobile optimization (text cramping, layout issues), extremely slow load speed (33/100), and weak CTA clarity—the primary button says "ERASE EYE BAGS" rather than a direct purchase call. The offer is somewhat buried among multiple CTAs ("ADD TO CART" appears twice), creating friction. Message match is moderate: the ad's playful tone ("Yes, we said it") doesn't strongly align with the clinical, results-focused page copy.
What this funnel does right. Steal these.
- Social proof9/10
- Trust signals8/10
- Headline8/10
- Offer clarity7/10
Where it's weak
- Page speed3/10
- Mobile experience4/10
- Call to action5/10
- Message match5/10
Full breakdown
Call to action
5/10Primary CTA 'ERASE EYE BAGS' is benefit-focused but vague; secondary 'ADD TO CART' buttons are more direct but less prominent. Multiple CTAs create confusion about the primary action.
- Bright pink button color stands out visually
- Benefit-focused language ('ERASE EYE BAGS') connects to user desire
- Multiple CTA placements ensure visibility throughout page
- Primary CTA 'ERASE EYE BAGS' is indirect—doesn't say 'Buy' or 'Add to Cart'
- Two 'ADD TO CART' buttons compete with main CTA, creating confusion
- 'COMPLETE THE COMBO' secondary CTA dilutes primary conversion goal
Page speed
3/10PageSpeed score of 33/100 indicates severe performance issues; page likely loads slowly with poor Core Web Vitals, impacting user experience and conversion.
- PageSpeed score of 33/100 is critically slow
- Multiple high-resolution images (before/after carousel, product shots, clinician photos) likely unoptimized
- Extensive social proof sections with many images increase load time
Trust signals
8/10Strong trust signals: verified clinician reviews with credentials and specialties, 4.8-star rating from 22,028 reviews, 'Trusted by 1M+ customers', 'Clinicians' Choice' badge, 365-day guarantee, derm-approved badge, and clinical study link.
- Verified clinician reviews with full credentials (specialty, years in practice)
- 4.8-star rating with 22,028 reviews and 1M+ customer trust claim
- 'Clinicians' Choice' badge with 902 clinicians endorsement
- Counterfeit warning at bottom may create doubt about product legitimacy
- Some claims (82-91% improvement) lack visible study citations on page
Mobile experience
4/10Mobile layout shows significant cramping and readability issues; text is small, spacing is tight, and the layout doesn't adapt well to narrow screens.
- Pink CTA buttons remain visible and tappable on mobile
- Product images scale to fit screen width
- Navigation menu collapses to hamburger icon
- Text is cramped and difficult to read on mobile screens
- Multiple CTAs stack vertically, creating long scrolling burden
- Before/after carousel images appear compressed and hard to see details
Headline
8/10Headline clearly states the product name and primary benefit: 'RevitalEyes® 2-in-1 Red Light Therapy + Peptide Eye Bags'
- Specific product name with benefit-driven descriptor
- Dual benefit clearly communicated (red light therapy + peptide)
- Positioned prominently in pink section above fold
Social proof
9/10Extensive social proof throughout: 4.8 stars from 22,028 reviews, 'Trusted by 1M+ customers', verified clinician reviews with credentials, before/after photos from multiple users, specific result percentages (82-91%), and customer testimonials with quotes.
- 4.8-star rating with 22,028 reviews and '1M+ customers' trust badge
- Multiple verified clinician reviews with credentials (Eleanor Dominguez-Curatolo, NP; Dr. Anila Khan, DO)
- Before/after transformation photos with named users (Lily R., etc.) and specific result claims (82% reduction in dark circles, 87% reduction in bags, 91% improvement in fine lines)
Message match
5/10Ad uses playful, cheeky tone ('Yes, we said it. 😏' / 'We know you want it too 👉') but landing page is clinical, results-focused, and serious in tone with emphasis on dermatology and clinical studies.
- Both ad and page focus on eye bags as primary problem
- Both emphasize results and transformation
- Product name appears in both ad context and page headline
- Ad tone is playful/cheeky; page tone is clinical/scientific—tonal mismatch
- Ad uses emoji and casual language; page uses formal clinician credentials and study data
- Ad implies desire/want; page emphasizes clinical proof and dermatology—different value propositions
Offer clarity
7/10Price is clearly displayed ($79.95, reduced from $159.99) with a 'TODAY ONLY' badge, but multiple product bundles and add-ons create some confusion about what's included.
- Clear pricing with strikethrough original price ($159.99)
- 'TODAY ONLY' urgency badge on combo offer
- Product name and benefits listed prominently
- Multiple CTAs ('ERASE EYE BAGS', 'ADD TO CART' appears twice) dilute clarity
- Bundle options and upsells (eye bag cream combo) compete for attention
- Free item offer at $0.00 with strikethrough price is confusing
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