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Beauty From Bees

Facebook · Instagram · Messenger · Video

Active
Days running
175 days
Funnel score
73/100
Page speed
59/100

The ad

Beauty From Bees ad creative

If your skin feels tight, flaky, or itchy no matter what you use — this is for you. Our Body Serum is 100% natural, waterless, and crafted by us (not in a lab) with just 7 calming ingredients that actually nourish your skin barrier. First-timers get 20% off — now’s your chance to feel relief. ✅ Try it for 20% off ➝ [Code: SERUM20] See why thousands are switching to skincare that actually delivers. Does not combine with other offers or subscriptions.

20% OFF: Code SERUM20

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Angle: Problem-solution positioning with natural/clean beauty differentiationHook: Pain point identification (tight, flaky, itchy skin)Format: Product demo/testimonial video

The funnel behind it

Beauty From Bees landing page

Offer: Free 8oz Body Serum (+ 20% off with code SERUM20)

73/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This landing page effectively captures the core offer (free serum + discount) with good message-to-page alignment. The mobile experience is clean and the CTA is prominent. However, the page lacks social proof elements (reviews/testimonials) that would validate the ad's claim about 'thousands switching.' The PageSpeed score of 59 is concerning for mobile conversions. The privacy notice, while trust-building, consumes valuable above-fold real estate. The headline could be stronger by echoing the ad's problem-solution angle rather than leading with 'free.' Adding urgency signals (limited time, stock count) and visible trust indicators would improve conversion potential.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Offer clarity: Free 8oz Body Serum offer is crystal clear and prominently displayed. Discount code (SERUM20) is explicitly mentioned in both ad and landing page.
  • Call to action: 'Yes please!' is action-oriented and matches the offer. High contrast black button is visible. However, no secondary CTAs or urgency indicators (countdown timer, limited stock) present.
  • Mobile experience: Clean mobile layout with proper spacing. Email input field and CTA button are appropriately sized. Privacy notice is accessible but takes up significant real estate.
  • Message match: Strong alignment between ad and landing page. Both emphasize natural ingredients, skin barrier nourishment, and the discount offer. Ad's problem statement (tight/flaky/itchy skin) could be more visible on page.
  • Trust signals: Privacy messaging present ('We respect your privacy') which is good. Brand logo visible. However, no trust badges, certifications, guarantees, or return policy visible on this fold.
  • Headline: Headline 'Want a FREE 8oz Body Serum?' is clear but generic. Doesn't reinforce the problem-solution narrative from the ad (tight, flaky, itchy skin).

Where it's weak

  • Social proof: Ad mentions 'thousands are switching' but landing page shows no reviews, testimonials, ratings, or user-generated content to validate claims.

Full breakdown

Call to action8/10

'Yes please!' is action-oriented and matches the offer. High contrast black button is visible. However, no secondary CTAs or urgency indicators (countdown timer, limited stock) present.

Page speed6/10

PageSpeed score of 59 indicates moderate performance issues. Mobile conversion rates typically drop 7% for every 1-second delay. This score suggests optimization needed.

Trust signals7/10

Privacy messaging present ('We respect your privacy') which is good. Brand logo visible. However, no trust badges, certifications, guarantees, or return policy visible on this fold.

Mobile experience8/10

Clean mobile layout with proper spacing. Email input field and CTA button are appropriately sized. Privacy notice is accessible but takes up significant real estate.

Headline7/10

Headline 'Want a FREE 8oz Body Serum?' is clear but generic. Doesn't reinforce the problem-solution narrative from the ad (tight, flaky, itchy skin).

Social proof5/10

Ad mentions 'thousands are switching' but landing page shows no reviews, testimonials, ratings, or user-generated content to validate claims.

Message match8/10

Strong alignment between ad and landing page. Both emphasize natural ingredients, skin barrier nourishment, and the discount offer. Ad's problem statement (tight/flaky/itchy skin) could be more visible on page.

Offer clarity9/10

Free 8oz Body Serum offer is crystal clear and prominently displayed. Discount code (SERUM20) is explicitly mentioned in both ad and landing page.

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