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Beauty From Bees

Facebook · Instagram · Messenger · Image

Active
Days running
175 days
Funnel score
68/100
Page speed
48/100

The ad

Beauty From Bees ad creative

While many lotions can sit on top of your skin, our water-free Body Serum absorbs deep, giving you that powerful hydration where you actually need it. When you need something to provide deep hydration, we deliver. Feed your skin what it needs with our best-selling Body Serum.

Perfect For All Skin Types

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Angle: Deep absorption and efficacy superiorityHook: Problem-solution contrastFormat: Image ad with product-focused copy

The funnel behind it

Beauty From Bees landing page

Offer: Body Serum - CA$32.00 (one-time purchase) or CA$28.80 (subscribe & save)

68/ 100

Funnel score

8-point CRO breakdown

How well the landing page behind the ad is built to convert, scored across 8 factors: offer, copy, speed, trust, mobile, message-match, CTA, and social proof.

This page excels at building trust through extensive social proof (38,454 reviews, 5-star rating, media features from ELLE and Good Housekeeping), detailed ingredient transparency, and clear benefit communication with visual icons. However, it suffers from poor page speed (48/100), a headline that doesn't match the ad's "Perfect For All Skin Types" positioning, and a generic CTA that doesn't create urgency. The mobile experience appears functional but the page layout is dense. The offer is clear but buried among many competing elements, and the primary CTA lacks persuasive copy.

What this funnel does right. Steal these.

  • Trust signals9/10
  • Social proof9/10
  • Offer clarity8/10
  • Mobile experience7/10

Where it's weak

  • Message match4/10
  • Page speed5/10
  • Headline5/10

Full breakdown

Call to action

6/10

Primary CTA 'Add to cart' is visible and functional but lacks persuasive copy, urgency, or benefit-driven language.

What works
  • CTA button is large, black, and highly visible at bottom of product section
  • Clear action (Add to cart) is unambiguous
What hurts
  • Generic 'Add to cart' lacks urgency or benefit messaging
  • No supporting copy like 'Shop now' (from ad) or benefit-driven language
  • No scarcity or time-limited messaging visible

Page speed

5/10

PageSpeed score of 48/100 converts to approximately 4.8, indicating poor performance that will negatively impact user experience and conversion rates.

What hurts
  • PageSpeed score of 48/100 is significantly below acceptable thresholds
  • Slow load time will increase bounce rate and reduce conversions
  • Performance issues likely stem from unoptimized images or scripts

Trust signals

9/10

Strong trust signals throughout: 38,454 verified reviews, media features (ELLE, Good Housekeeping), 30-day guarantee, 'Made in Canada' badge, pure natural ingredients, and detailed transparency about formulation.

What works
  • 38,454 reviews with 5-star rating creates strong social proof
  • Media credibility badges (ELLE, Good Housekeeping) at top of page
  • Multiple trust indicators: 30-day guarantee, free shipping $125+, Made in Canada, pure natural ingredients

Mobile experience

7/10

Mobile layout appears functional with stacked elements, readable text, and accessible buttons, though the dense information architecture may create scrolling fatigue.

What works
  • Product image is large and centered for mobile viewing
  • CTA button is full-width and easily tappable
  • Text is readable with appropriate sizing
What hurts
  • Very dense page with many sections requiring extensive scrolling
  • Multiple expandable sections (Description, Ingredients, etc.) may reduce discoverability

Headline

5/10

The page headline 'Deeply Hydrates, Strengthening Your Skin's Barrier' focuses on hydration benefits but doesn't match the ad's 'Perfect For All Skin Types' positioning.

What works
  • Headline is benefit-focused and specific to the product
  • Clearly communicates the main value proposition (hydration + barrier strengthening)
What hurts
  • Doesn't align with ad headline 'Perfect For All Skin Types'
  • Misses opportunity to emphasize universal applicability mentioned in the ad

Social proof

9/10

Extensive social proof throughout: 38,454 reviews with 5-star rating displayed prominently, featured in ELLE and Good Housekeeping badges, multiple customer testimonials with photos and verified reviews visible lower on page.

What works
  • 38,454 reviews with 5-star rating shown directly under product name
  • Media credibility badges (ELLE, Good Housekeeping) visible at top
  • Multiple customer testimonials with photos and star ratings visible in lower sections

Message match

4/10

Significant mismatch between ad and page: ad emphasizes 'water-free' and 'deep absorption' but page headline focuses on 'barrier strengthening'; ad says 'Perfect For All Skin Types' but page doesn't emphasize universal applicability.

What works
  • Both ad and page emphasize hydration as core benefit
  • Product name 'Body Serum' matches across both
What hurts
  • Ad headline 'Perfect For All Skin Types' not reflected in page headline
  • Ad's key differentiator 'water-free' not prominently featured on page
  • Ad's 'deep absorption' messaging not echoed in page headline or primary positioning

Offer clarity

8/10

Price is prominently displayed (CA$32.00) with clear one-time vs. subscription options shown, though the offer itself (what you get) is implicit rather than explicitly stated.

What works
  • Price clearly visible: CA$32.00 for 250ml/8oz
  • Two purchase options clearly differentiated (one-time vs. subscribe & save with discount)
  • Size selector dropdown visible
What hurts
  • No explicit statement of what's included or quantity per purchase
  • Special offer section mentions 'Free Body Serum' but conditions are unclear without reading fine print

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